Wednesday, 28 January 2015

Week 4 BI

No,10,Jalan SM 2A 1/2,
Taman Fasa 2A,32040,
Seri Manjung.

15 January 2015

Human Resource Manager,
Lot 35, Jalan Kelana Jaya,
52600 Kuala Lumpur.

Dear Sir,

The Post To Apply A Job As A Technician

I like to apply this position at your company because  I have a skill in Programming and at Information And Technology course. I also apply to your company because your company because it has a good reputation.I also have a working experience at computer’s shop for a year.

So I hope you make a wise decision to take me as your workers at your company.So, with this letter I compile with my resume so you can read about myself and you also can know my skills.

Yours Faithfully,


(FAREEZ IKHMAL BIN AHMAD PADIL)




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15 comments:

  1. Unknown5 February 2015 at 03:53

    Great job bob , ☺☺

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  2. Unknown5 February 2015 at 07:32

    please makesure you signame when you print..you also have current grammar mistake.. after this please make corecction

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  3. repair phone pantai dalam kuala lumpur5 February 2015 at 20:36

    bob keep it up

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  4. Unknown7 February 2015 at 22:58

    computer's shop should be computer shop

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  5. Unknown8 February 2015 at 02:14

    warning please diet because you so big.... please writing dear sir/madam

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  6. Unknown8 February 2015 at 02:32

    Greeting: Dear Sir/Madam. Who knows she/he's a lady/man??
    Title: Check for sentence structure error.
    Content: Too short. Make more self promoting points. What skill??
    Closure: Grammatical error. "workers" (employee/worker) singular and plural misunderstanding. "enclosed" is more suitable than compile.
    Alignment: Please Justify.
    Signature: Invisible???
    Font: Remember to use Arial 12.
    Extras: Please use a better background. It's so hard to read.

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  7. Unknown8 February 2015 at 04:22

    don't forget put "Madam" because you don't know gender of your boss

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  8. Unknown8 February 2015 at 04:53

    bob's your letter too short and you need to signnature...and anything else you can think yourself...

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  9. norsalmina8 February 2015 at 05:37

    your letter is to shot

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  10. intan_ahmad8 February 2015 at 05:56

    Good! but your name doesn't put in bracket.

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  11. Unknown8 February 2015 at 07:24

    try the best to not do a simple mistake bob...you can do it

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  12. Unknown8 February 2015 at 07:50

    Good work but no signature .. make sure next time you put your signature okay ..

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  13. Unknown8 February 2015 at 17:26

    Kindly bold the subject line..make sure you have 3 paragraphs in your leter - opening, content and closing....overall, it is a good letter bob!

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  14. Unknown8 February 2015 at 17:28

    Subject line should be - Application for the Post of a Technician

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  15. Unknown11 February 2015 at 08:36

    Assalamualaikum bob. I suggest you to change your background of your blog, because it is hard for me to read your letter with my glasses, but your letter as far look better. Keep going :)

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